Geoffrey Long
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30|09:08 The Hotel Ghost

The hotel ghost wanders from floor to floor,
Rustling starched sheets, rattling loose windowpanes,
Scaring the bejeebus out of an occasional tourist,
But she gets no joy from this.
A man who saw her claims she's a lost woman,
A murdered prostitute or a forbidden abortion gone wrong;
Another declares with absolute certainty
She's the specter of a wife who took her own life here
After following her wayward husband to some illicit tryst,
but neither of these wishful dramatists come close.
A woman who saw her one alarming June night strikes nearer,
She guesses the phantom is an innkeeper herself,
A former owner dissatisfied with the current corporation,
But even this isn't quite right.
In fact, it's only one young girl who nails it,
Solves the mystery of the lady in black,
And only because she's the only one to hear as well as see,
To catch the faintest strain of the ghost's frail singsong rhythms,
Humming softly to herself an old cheerful Cuban folk melody,
As she keeps on performing the same routines
That brought her such comfort after she fled her mournful life,
Changing soiled sheets and
Cleaning smudged windows
Of the fingerprints from a million curious wandering children
Pressing their noses against the glass to gaze at the sea,
As her own once did,
And asking their madres what lay on the other side.

Comments
LiveJournal

I'm not sure I get this one. I get that she used to be a cleaning woman at the hotel, but why was she sad? It sounds like her own children left her to explore the other side of the sea, but if they left her, what did she have to flee?
- Carol

MT

Agreed, this one's a little obtuse. The story is that they left her and were lost at sea, hence the reference to fleeing her mournful life. That's what led her to leave Cuba and come to wherever this hotel is to be found.

LiveJournal

Oh! Thank you. I completely missed that they were actually lost at sea -- I just thought they had moved away from home. Thanks for the clarification!

MT

It wasn't deliberately stated – it was just implied. That's what I meant when I said it was obtuse. :)

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